朴实感人型工地人物叙事诗创作

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id: "93c97497-f8c2-4377-87c9-028e74317408"
name: "朴实感人型工地人物叙事诗创作"
description: "生成以真实工地劳动者为原型、严格基于用户提供的硬事实、语言极度平实克制、情感内敛不渲染的叙事性诗歌或歌词，适用于口述、朗诵或配乐演唱。"
version: "0.1.0"
tags:
  - "narrative-poetry"
  - "construction-workers"
  - "fact-based-writing"
  - "minimalist-style"
  - "oral-performance"
triggers:
  - "写朴实感人的工地人物诗"
  - "用真实细节写工人故事"
  - "不要渲染，只要事实和物件"
  - "改成能朗诵的朴素歌词"
  - "工地叙事诗要真实不煽情"
---

# 朴实感人型工地人物叙事诗创作

生成以真实工地劳动者为原型、严格基于用户提供的硬事实、语言极度平实克制、情感内敛不渲染的叙事性诗歌或歌词，适用于口述、朗诵或配乐演唱。

## Prompt

# Goal
生成一首朴实感人、无虚构、无渲染的叙事性短诗（或歌词），聚焦一位工地劳动者（如‘老周’），仅使用用户明确提供的事实性信息作为全部内容来源；输出必须可直接用于朗诵、录音或排练。

# Constraints & Style
- ✅ MUST use ONLY the user-provided factual anchors: ‘被车压过’、‘钉子穿过脚背，第二天下地’、‘在工地因高温倒下’、‘没留下任何话’；
- ✅ MUST replace all non-verifiable or procedurally implausible details (e.g., ‘考勤表写高温中暑’) with real, observable, site-verified equivalents (e.g., ‘蓝皮登记本上他签的名，日期是倒下的那天’);
- ✅ MUST avoid all adjectives of evaluation (‘brave’, ‘tough’, ‘heroic’), metaphors, similes, time-period framing (‘back then’), spatial dramatization (‘under scorching sun’), and psychological projection;
- ✅ MUST ground emotion solely in tangible, repeatable, sensory artifacts: worn clothing, signed documents, physical imprints (e.g., ‘fingerprint from guiding rebar’), everyday objects (chalk, Ren Dan, pencil numbers);
- ✅ MUST maintain rhythmic breath and structural clarity (e.g., verse/chorus/bridge) without sacrificing factual austerity;
- ❌ MUST NOT invent age, location, weather descriptors beyond ‘很热’, medical outcomes, dialogue, internal states, or bureaucratic labels not confirmed by user;
- ❌ MUST NOT conflate document types (e.g., mixing attendance logs with incident reports);
- Language: neutral, present-tense or simple past, subject-verb-object dominant; line breaks for pause—not emphasis.

# Workflow
1. Extract and list only the user-confirmed factual anchors;
2. Audit each existing detail in draft against real-world construction site practice (e.g., document workflows, PPE usage, common carry items);
3. Replace any implausible or unverified element with its authentic, observable counterpart;
4. Compose using only those verified anchors + their direct physical extensions (e.g., ‘signed name’ → ‘blue-covered register’; ‘taught me to hold rebar’ → ‘fingerprint imprint’);
5. Trim all non-essential words until only action, object, and date/name remain—then verify word count and emotional resonance balance.

## Triggers

- 写朴实感人的工地人物诗
- 用真实细节写工人故事
- 不要渲染，只要事实和物件
- 改成能朗诵的朴素歌词
- 工地叙事诗要真实不煽情