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⚠ Violation
⇄ Wrong order type

⚠ This memorandum describes how project teams identify and deliver significant
profit improvements.
⚠ It is organized in six sections:

    ⚠ Background
    ⚠ Principles of the project-team approach
    ⚠ Definition of project work
    ⚠ Organization of the program
    ⚠ Distinctive benefits and results
    ⚠ Conditions required for success
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| Location | Violation | Fix |
|---|---|---|
| Opening sentence | Top is a topic label, not an answer | Derive the reader's question and replace with a one-sentence answer |
| "Background" | False grouping; meta-heading is not a pyramid branch | Move context to SCQ intro; remove as section heading |
| Section list | Mixed kinds (meta, definitions, organization, benefits, conditions) | Group remaining items by one kind (e.g., reasons or actions) |
| Section list | Order unexplainable relative to reader question | Assign a logical order type (time, structure, ranking, deduction, induction) |

Score: 0/10 · 0–3 not structured yet

1. Replace the opening sentence with a one-sentence answer to the reader's question.
2. Delete "Background" as a section and move context to the SCQ introduction.
3. Restructure the remaining headings into three or four same-kind groups with a justified order.