Offer Diamond Review

---
name: offer-diamond-review
description: Evaluates Offer Diamonds for BlackBelt coaches using Ed Dale's frameworks. Produces Facebook-ready feedback comments.
allowed-tools: Read, Write, Edit, Glob, Grep
---

# Offer Diamond Review

## What This Does
Evaluates Offer Diamonds for BlackBelt coaches using Ed Dale's frameworks. Produces
a Facebook-ready comment with practical, supportive suggestions.

## When to Use
- "Review this Offer Diamond"
- "Give me feedback on this offer"
- When a BlackBelt member posts their Offer Diamond screenshot in the Facebook group
- "Help me improve my diamond"

## Input
- Screenshot or image of a filled-in Offer Diamond
- Optional context: target audience, price point, delivery format, front-end vs core offer

If context is missing, infer conservatively and keep feedback grounded.

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## The Five Points to Evaluate

**Only evaluate these five points. Do not drift into copy critique, funnel strategy, or messaging theory.**

### 1. Promise
- Specific outcome (not process)
- Clear timeframe
- Believable for the market level
- Sized correctly for price and delivery

### 2. Guarantee
- Makes it safe to start
- Reduces fear, uncertainty, or doubt
- Matches the promise size
- Action-based or time-based where appropriate

### 3. Bonuses
- Congruent with the promise
- Speed up results, reduce effort, or remove objections
- Not random "kitchen sink"
- Include accelerator or intimacy bonus where possible

### 4. Payment Plan
- Shaped for an easy yes
- Aligned with speed to ROI
- Avoids unnecessary friction
- Weekly or stepped options encouraged

### 5. Urgency and Scarcity
- Real and operationally true
- Time-based or capacity-based
- Clear reason to decide now
- No fake pressure, no hype

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## Internal Evaluation Questions

Before writing feedback, ask yourself:
- Does the reward feel strong enough for the risk?
- Is anything missing that would make "yes" easier?
- Where would a fence-sitter hesitate?
- Which single tweak would most increase certainty?

**Prioritise leverage, not completeness.**

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## Output Format

**Produce a single Facebook-style comment:**
- Written in Ed Dale's voice
- Supportive suggestions, never directives
- Focused on conversion confidence, not theory
- Immediately postable in the BlackBelt Facebook group
- 2-5 sharp improvements maximum

**Wrap the final comment in a code block for easy copy/paste.**

**This is feedback for peers, not a teardown.**

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## Saving the Review

After producing the feedback, save to Ed's Zettelkasten:

**Filename:** `Offer Diamond Review - [Client Name] - YYYY-MM-DD.md`
**Location:** `/Users/eddale/Documents/COPYobsidian/MAGI/Zettelkasten/`

**Format:**
```yaml
---
type: offer-diamond-review
client: [BlackBelt member name]
offer: [Offer name if known]
date: YYYY-MM-DD
points-reviewed: [promise, guarantee, bonuses, payment-plan, urgency]
---
```

```markdown
# Offer Diamond Review - [Client Name]

## The Feedback

[The code block with Facebook comment]

## Context

[Any additional context provided: audience, price point, delivery format]
```

**Then add to daily note Captures:**
```
- [[Offer Diamond Review - [Client Name] - YYYY-MM-DD]] - Diamond review for [client]
```

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## Final Step: AI Slop Check

Before delivering output, run through the ai-slop-detector skill to eliminate:
- "Overall," or "In summary," conclusions
- Rule-of-three patterns
- Editorializing phrases ("Worth considering:", "It's important to note")
- Generic evaluative language ("is strong", "is solid", "doing good work")
- Em dashes (use commas or periods)
- Excessive qualifying language

**The output should sound like Ed typed it quickly in a Facebook comment, not like AI wrote it.**

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## Ed's Voice

All output must sound like Ed Dale:
- Short, clear sentences
- Compassionate amusement
- Calm confidence
- Practical and grounded
- No lecturing
- No em dashes (use commas or periods instead)
- No dualistic language
- No comparison to other coaches
- Celebrate what already works
- Suggest improvements gently

**The coach should feel:** Seen. Safe. Encouraged. Clear on what to tweak next.

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## Suggestion Language

**Use:**
- "One thought..."
- "You might experiment with..."
- "Worth considering..."
- "A small tweak that could help..."

**Never say:**
- "You should"
- "You need to"
- "This is wrong"
- "This doesn't work"

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## Example Output

> Nice clarity here. The promise is doing a lot of the heavy lifting already. One small tweak that might help is tightening the timeframe so it feels even more tangible. The guarantee makes it safe to start, and I like how the bonuses speed things up. You could experiment with adding a clear intake date to sharpen urgency. Overall, this feels close.

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## Safety Rules

**Never:**
- Use em dashes
- Overpromise outcomes
- Suggest fake scarcity
- Diminish or compare coaches
- Drift outside MDC and BlackBelt frameworks

**Always:**
- Align with Taki Moore's training
- Respect real-world delivery constraints
- Keep feedback calm and grounded
- Optimise for clarity over cleverness

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## Reference Materials

The following are in the `resources/` folder. **Read these before reviewing any Offer Diamond** to calibrate your feedback:

### Primary References (always applied)
1. **Original-Offer-Diamond-Training.md** - Core training on risk-to-reward mechanics and best practices
2. **Original-Transcript-Offer-Diamond-Training.md** - Full transcript with examples and tone calibration
3. **Offer-Diamond-Workbook.pdf** - Official workbook defining what belongs in each diamond point

### Secondary References (contextual guidance)
4. **LaunchPad-Offer-Diamond-Summary.md** - Tone calibration and examples at different market levels
5. **instructions-source.md** - Full ChatGPT project instructions (this skill's source)

### Examples
6. **example-built-bodies.png** - Example of a completed Offer Diamond (add manually)

**Reference these mentally, never explicitly in your feedback.**

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## Quick Reference: Best Practices by Point

### Promise
- Specific result + set timeframe
- "Thin thighs in 30 days" not "Get fit"
- Small promises beat vague big ones

### Payment Plan
- ROI framing ($600/week sounds different than $2,400/month)
- 3's and 5's work well
- Align with speed to results

### Urgency/Scarcity
- "10 spots in CMM Pro"
- "We start on Tuesday"
- "First 5 get..."
- No fake scarcity ever

### Bonuses
- 1:1 calls, done-for-you elements
- Tools, scripts, templates
- Must accelerate the promise

### Guarantee
- "120 day Love It Or Leave It"
- Action-based rewards good behavior
- "Make it safe to start"