Revedres Writing Style

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name: revedres-writing-style
description: Use when drafting or revising prose, the 150-word abstract, and the introduction in the Review of Educational Research (RER) synthesizing voice and APA 7 style. Lands the integrative voice; it does not build the analytic spine (revedres-organizing-framework) or design exhibits (revedres-tables-figures).
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# Writing Style (revedres-writing-style)

## When to trigger

- The framework and exhibits are settled and the prose needs to match the RER bar
- A draft summarizes study-by-study instead of synthesizing across studies
- The abstract is over 150 words or reads like a primary-research abstract
- The introduction buries the contribution or over-signposts

## The RER voice: synthesize, do not summarize, for a broad education audience

RER is read **across education and adjacent disciplines**, not by one method club. The voice is **comprehensive, critical, and integrative**: authoritative about the field, fair to every camp, and accessible to a reader who does not already know this literature. The single most-punished move is **prose that walks through one study per paragraph** — "Smith (2019) found… Jones (2020) found…" — which is summary, not synthesis. Instead, organize paragraphs around **claims, constructs, and tensions**, citing clusters of studies as evidence for each.

## The introduction arc

The opening should, in order:

1. **Frame the field and the problem** — what is at stake for learning, instruction, policy, or equity (in plain terms, for a broad reader).
2. **Establish the need for a synthesis now** — the growth, method shift, conflict, or missing frame that makes this the moment (the `revedres-topic-selection` "why now").
3. **State the organizing question and the framework** — the spine that is the contribution (`revedres-organizing-framework`), named up front.
4. **State the bottom line early** — what the integrated literature shows and what remains open; do *not* withhold it to the conclusion.
5. **Brief roadmap** — mirror the framework's cells, without over-signposting.

## Synthesis-craft at the paragraph level

- **Topic sentence = a claim about the field**, then studies as support — not "Author X did Y."
- **Reconcile, don't tally.** When studies conflict, explain *why* (estimand, design, population), per `revedres-comprehensiveness-and-balance`.
- **Carry credibility in the prose.** "Two well-identified experiments… whereas weaker correlational work…" — weight, don't count.
- **Steelman before critiquing.** Give each perspective its strongest case before its limits.
- **Critical, not neutral.** RER wants *critical* synthesis: judge the field's methods and assumptions, name what it gets wrong, and label your own read.

## RER house style (检索于 2026-06；以官网为准)

- **APA 7th edition** throughout — citations, references, headings, tables, figures, and bias-free language.
- **Abstract ≤ 150 words**, with keywords; written as a *review* abstract (question → corpus/method → what the synthesis shows → implications), not a single-study abstract.
- **Masked manuscript**: a blinded title page in the main file; no identifying self-references in the body (anonymize only limited-circulation self-citations — keep ordinary published self-citations visible). See `revedres-submission`.
- Microsoft Word (not PDF); separate unblinded title page with APA-7 Author Note; Author Bios.

## Checklist

- [ ] Paragraphs organized around claims/constructs/tensions, not one-study-per-paragraph
- [ ] Conflicting findings reconciled (why they differ), not vote-counted
- [ ] Credibility carried in the prose (weight by design quality, not count)
- [ ] Each perspective steelmanned before critique; author's own read labeled
- [ ] Introduction follows frame → why-now → spine → bottom-line-early → roadmap
- [ ] Abstract ≤ 150 words, review-style, with keywords
- [ ] APA 7 throughout (citations, references, headings, bias-free language)
- [ ] Manuscript masked correctly (blinded body; only limited-circulation self-cites anonymized)

## Anti-patterns

- "Smith found… Jones found…" study-by-study march (summary, not synthesis)
- Withholding the bottom line until the conclusion (RER readers want it up front)
- A 250-word abstract or one written like a single-study report
- Neutral cataloguing with no critical judgment of the field's methods or assumptions
- Over-signposting ("In this section we will…") doing the work the argument should do
- Non-APA-7 citations/headings, or a draft that de-anonymizes the authors in the body

## Output format

```
【Synthesis test】paragraphs by claim/construct/tension (not per-study)? Y/N
【Conflict handling】reconciled, not tallied? Y/N
【Intro arc】frame → why-now → spine → bottom-line-early → roadmap? Y/N
【Critical stance】field's methods/assumptions judged; author read labeled? Y/N
【Abstract】≤150 words, review-style, keywords? Y/N
【APA 7】citations/refs/headings/bias-free language conform? Y/N
【Masking】body blinded; only limited-circulation self-cites anonymized? Y/N
【Next step】→ revedres-transparency-and-reproducibility (coding reliability, open materials, MARS/PRISMA)
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