Jaar Writing Style

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name: jaar-writing-style
description: Use when drafting or polishing the prose of a Journal of the American Academy of Religion (JAAR) article so it is clear, analytic, gender-neutral, and readable across the study of religion. Improves scholarly prose; it does not invent content. For reference formatting use jaar-citation-and-style.
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# Writing Style (jaar-writing-style)

A JAAR article should read as rigorous humanities scholarship that a religion scholar **outside** your
area can follow with pleasure. The prose must carry an argument (not just inform), define its terms,
and meet JAAR's house conventions (gender-neutral language, serial comma, italicized foreign terms).

## When to trigger

- Drafting the introduction/conclusion or doing a final prose pass
- The argument is strong but the writing is dense, jargon-heavy, or flat
- Aligning to JAAR's language conventions before submission
- Handling foreign-language terms, transliteration, and technical vocabulary

## Prose principles for JAAR

1. **Argument-forward.** Lead paragraphs with claims; use evidence to support them. The reader should
   always know what you are arguing and why this paragraph matters.
2. **Accessible across the field.** Define specialist terms and transliterations on first use; gloss
   tradition-specific concepts; spell out what a non-specialist needs — without condescending.
3. **Analytic, not confessional or hagiographic.** Describe believers' claims precisely; keep your
   analytic voice distinct (ties to `jaar-theory-and-method`).
4. **House conventions.** **Gender-neutral language**; **serial (Oxford) comma**; **italicize foreign
   words**; consistent transliteration system; American spelling unless a reason otherwise.
5. **Economy.** Cut throat-clearing and redundant context; every quotation earns its space; mind the
   word budget (footnotes and references count — see `jaar-structure-and-exposition`).

## Quotations and terms

- Quote to show evidence, then analyze the quotation — never let a block quote stand unexplained.
- Provide originals where the argument depends on wording; keep transliteration consistent.
- Translate non-English terms on first use; italicize and define.

## Anti-patterns

- Dense theory-jargon that excludes non-specialists
- Confessional, devotional, or advocacy tone
- Undefined transliterated terms or inconsistent transliteration
- Gendered generics; missing serial commas; inconsistent spelling
- Quotations dropped in without analysis

## Output format

```
【Argument-forward?】claims lead, evidence supports? [Y/N]
【Accessible?】terms/transliterations defined for non-specialists? [Y/N]
【Analytic, non-confessional?】[Y/N]
【House conventions】gender-neutral + serial comma + italicized foreign terms? [Y/N]
【Economy】tightened to the word budget? [Y/N]
【Next】jaar-citation-and-style
```

## Supplementary resources

- [`../../resources/official-source-map.md`](../../resources/official-source-map.md) — JAAR language conventions (gender-neutral, serial comma, foreign-term italics)