Concise Writing

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name: concise-writing
description: Cut writing to its essential words so every one earns its place, without losing meaning or voice. Use when a piece is too long, dense, or padded, or whenever brevity respects the reader's time.
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# Concise writing

Concise is not short for its own sake; it is the removal of everything
that does not carry meaning, so what remains lands harder. Most drafts
can lose a quarter of their words and gain force. Brevity is respect for
the reader's time.

## Method

1. **Cut the filler phrases.** "In order to" becomes "to"; "due to the
   fact that" becomes "because"; "at this point in time" becomes "now".
   Delete throat-clearers ("It is worth noting that", "I think that", "As
   you know"). These add length and subtract nothing (see clear-writing).
2. **Delete redundant words.** "Advance planning" (planning),
   "end result" (result), "completely eliminate" (eliminate), "past
   history" (history). English is full of pairs that say one thing twice;
   keep one.
3. **Replace phrases with words.** "Make a decision" (decide), "give
   consideration to" (consider), "is able to" (can). Verbs hidden inside
   noun phrases ("perform an analysis of" for "analyze") bloat sentences;
   free the verb.
4. **Prefer the active voice and a clear subject.** "The committee
   rejected the proposal" (5 words) beats "The proposal was rejected by
   the committee" (7) and names the actor. Passive constructions add
   words and hide who acted (see clear-writing).
5. **Question every sentence, then every paragraph.** Does the piece lose
   anything if this goes? Often not. Whole sentences that restate,
   qualify needlessly, or wander off-point are the biggest cuts (see
   editing-and-revision's cut pass). Aim to say it once, well.
6. **Set a target and edit to it.** Writing to a word or time limit forces
   the discipline: what would you keep if you had half the space? The
   constraint reveals what actually matters. A tweet, an abstract, or an
   exec summary is this exercise (see exec-one-pager, tweet-thread).

## Boundaries

- Concise is not terse or cryptic; cutting a necessary connective or an
  example that aids understanding hurts clarity. Remove what does not
  serve the reader, keep what does (see clear-writing, structure-and-flow).
- Some content needs room: a careful argument, a teaching explanation, a
  story's scene. Brevity serves the point; it does not override it.
- Rhythm matters: an all-short-sentences staccato tires the reader.
  Concise means no wasted words, not uniformly minimal ones (see
  voice-and-tone).